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还要不要写一首诗

还要不要写一首诗在暮色寒冬还未开启的时候在满地野花还未枯萎干净的时候在你又一次要把自己遗忘的时候还要不要写一首诗在这个城市就要被尘埃淹没的时候在这个世界就要把自己毁灭的时候在你又一次迟疑了的时候梦想已丢在了路上微笑又被现实迷茫还有什么值得去得到还有什么可以去丧失还要不要写一首诗就从上一个故事
作者：没有名字可以不时间：2012年07月30日 04:24 查看全文

没有名字可以不发布于 2012-07-31 16:20 7 楼^#

<p id="post_content_22052856928" class="d_post_content">多谢5、6楼，你们都很不错，我以后会多多献丑的<br>

游客7 发布于 2012-07-31 10:00 6 楼^#

不管有没有名字，<BR>都可以；<BR>LZ 和楚人的，<BR>都是好诗！<BR> <BR>写一首，<BR>根本不够，<BR>写百首，<BR>也不嫌多。<BR> <BR>把你的梦想<BR>变成诗句<BR>把你的微笑<BR>融在诗句里<BR><BR>留在168；<BR> <BR>她将永不再枯萎<BR>也不会凋零 <br> 她不会被遗忘<BR>更不会毁灭<BR><BR>不需要问 ---<BR>要不要写?<BR>只要生命继续，<BR>梦想就是诗篇。<BR><BR>请继续，<BR>一定要继续写<BR><BR><BR><BR><br>

游客 IP:24.99.13.* 发布于 2012-07-31 09:38 5 楼^#

五月的雨是醒着的，要写一首诗。<br> <br> <br> <br>可以和你们做朋友？<br><a href="mailto:chenggeliu@yahoo.com">chenggeliu@yahoo.com</a><br> <br> <br> <br> <br>

没有名字可以不发布于 2012-07-31 07:47 4 楼^#

谢谢，楚人申士的即兴诗很不错，有意境<br>

楚人申士发布于 2012-07-30 16:30 3 楼^#

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman"> 楼主好诗！</font><br><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"> <br><p style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt; line-height: normal; text-autospace: ; mso-layout-grid-align: none;" class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 12pt; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-fareast;" lang="ZH-CN"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 10pt; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-fareast;" lang="ZH-CN">和【</span><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 10pt; mso-bidi-font-family: SimSun;" lang="ZH-CN">没有名字可以不】的</span><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 10pt; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-fareast;" lang="ZH-CN">诗</span><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 10pt; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-fareast;"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></span><br><p style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt; line-height: normal; text-autospace: ; mso-layout-grid-align: none;" class="MsoNormal"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><br><p style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt; line-height: normal; text-autospace: ; mso-layout-grid-align: none;" class="MsoNormal"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><br><p style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 10pt; mso-bidi-font-family: SimSun;" lang="ZH-CN">那当然，你要</span><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 10pt; mso-bidi-font-family: SimSun;"><o:p></o:p></span><br><p style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt; line-height: normal; text-autospace: ; mso-layout-grid-align: none;" class="MsoNormal"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><br><p style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 10pt; mso-bidi-font-family: SimSun;" lang="ZH-CN">并已经奉上了一首</span><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 10pt; mso-bidi-font-family: SimSun;"><o:p></o:p></span><br><p style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt; line-height: normal; text-autospace: ; mso-layout-grid-align: none;" class="MsoNormal"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><br><p style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 10pt; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-bidi-font-family: SimSun;" lang="ZH-CN">当</span><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 10pt; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-fareast;" lang="ZH-CN">暮色还未染指</span><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 10pt; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-fareast;"><o:p></o:p></span><br><p style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt; line-height: normal; text-autospace: ; mso-layout-grid-align: none;" class="MsoNormal"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><br><p style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 10pt; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-fareast;" lang="ZH-CN">寒冬还未来临</span><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 10pt; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-fareast;"><o:p></o:p></span><br><p style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt; line-height: normal; text-autospace: ; mso-layout-grid-align: none;" class="MsoNormal"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><br><p style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 10pt; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-fareast;" lang="ZH-CN">当鲜花还未凋残</span><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 10pt; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-fareast;"><o:p></o:p></span><br><p style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt; line-height: normal; text-autospace: ; mso-layout-grid-align: none;" class="MsoNormal"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><br><p style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 10pt; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-fareast;" lang="ZH-CN">记忆还很清新</span><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 10pt; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-fareast;"><o:p></o:p></span><br><p style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt; line-height: normal; text-autospace: ; mso-layout-grid-align: none;" class="MsoNormal"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><br><p style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt; line-height: normal; text-autospace: ; mso-layout-grid-align: none;" class="MsoNormal"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><br><p style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 10pt; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-fareast;" lang="ZH-CN">即便城市被淹没</span><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 10pt; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-fareast;"><o:p></o:p></span><br><p style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt; line-height: normal; text-autospace: ; mso-layout-grid-align: none;" class="MsoNormal"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><br><p style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 10pt; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-fareast;" lang="ZH-CN">世界遇险境</span><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 10pt; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-fareast;"><o:p></o:p></span><br><p style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt; line-height: normal; text-autospace: ; mso-layout-grid-align: none;" class="MsoNormal"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><br><p style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 10pt; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-fareast;" lang="ZH-CN">无迟疑地留下了</span><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 10pt; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-fareast;"><o:p></o:p></span><br><p style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt; line-height: normal; text-autospace: ; mso-layout-grid-align: none;" class="MsoNormal"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><br><p style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 10pt; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-fareast;" lang="ZH-CN">曾经的惆怅和微笑</span><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 10pt; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-fareast;"><o:p></o:p></span><br><p style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt; line-height: normal; text-autospace: ; mso-layout-grid-align: none;" class="MsoNormal"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><br><p style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 10pt; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-fareast;" lang="ZH-CN">梦想的诗句与你随行</span><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 10pt; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-fareast;"><o:p></o:p></span><br><p style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt; line-height: normal; text-autospace: ; mso-layout-grid-align: none;" class="MsoNormal"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font><br><p style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 10pt; mso-bidi-font-family: SimSun;" lang="ZH-CN">花含晨露那般晶莹</span><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 10pt; mso-bidi-font-family: SimSun;"><o:p></o:p></span><br><p style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt; line-height: normal; text-autospace: ; mso-layout-grid-align: none;" class="MsoNormal"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></font><br> <br>

BlueSky 发布于 2012-07-30 13:48 2 楼^#

有思想

游客 IP:65.49.14.* 发布于 2012-07-30 12:17 1 楼^#

有意思。